I saw this long ago, but I think I didn't get time to comment on this. I would say the picture is good but you kinda weaken the strenght of really nice lineart. I think you add to much flashes/lights without thinking twice. From far away the picture looks good. Art base on first view and first impact, the picture do the work well. The picture manage to gain attention and memorize it. But still, somewhing is wrong here.
Thanks for pointing out the strengths and weaknesses. I will like to dive into line illustrations some more, and I'm quickly discovering that there is a lot more involved than just the lines. For lighting, I will need to study existing line illustrations from various artists and see how they handle the light.
How in the world can you do such epic linearts after doing, like...Maybe 5 pics with linearts? :U I drew over 9000 pics with linearts and I still can't do epic shiz like that ;A; I should stop complaining and practise....XD Anyway, I like the lineart because you took care of it so that the dark spots don't touch each other, in that way, you can still see the shapes of everything, I like dat. Also, the texure you gave the dragon is really epic. I like it, very good job here, Tsitra!
THAT'S REALLY EPIC ;3 I like how you added thsoe black parts as shading and stuff *W* It gives really cartoony effect ;D NICE WORK ON THAT C8 I LIKE THE IDEA HERE, AWESOME POSE AND PERSPECTIVE ;3 KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK AMAZING BACKGROUND AND EVERYTHING HERE