Kindle and Lasair

(Update: I won! )

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Mini Story
As Kindle glides to the lake, memories of Lasair floods her mind. They are so strong that she feels like he's right there, touching her. Then she looks at her reflection, no one's there.

Artist's Comments
Well after 7 hours I got this in just in time to the contest's deadline. I was to paint Lasair and Kindle in a scene inspired by a song. Lasair is not a ghost Instead he's Kindle's memory. Below is the lyrics. Comments? Critique?

Inspired Song
Song: Stereo Love (snippet)
Artist: Edward Maya
Can I get to your soul?
Can you get to my thought?
Can we promise we won't let go?
All the things that I need
All the things that you need
You can make it feel so real.

I hate to see you cry
Your smile is a beautiful lie
I hate to see you cry
My love is dying inside
I hate to see you cry
Your smile is a beautiful lie
I hate to see you cry
My love is dying inside

Miscellaneous
Time: 7 hours
Program: Photoshop CS4
OC Owners: Lasair Kindle
Finished this at 2 AM! Can't....stop....painting!