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great job, fluttershy looks adorable
something about all 3 of them, that i think is the one...the one little thing preventing them from being perfect... they don't look like they belong.. they all look like their posing for a picture... instead of looking truly alive. Many fans look at there favorite characters as being 'alive' ... but the fact that they are all, even as they are interacting with their enviornment... look directly at the viewer.. I have no problem with breaking of the forth wall, but they just don't feel as alive when you do that. It feels forced rather than natural. It feels fake rather than real. It feels animated rather than alive. Because I don't know about you... but I don't think you'd be staring at some random person on the other side of some 'screen' while butterflies flew around you. Or while you lassoed something. It just doesn't really look real... They don't look 'alive'
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I still LOVE this piece though...the light is perfect... it still..wow... I really...really...love this piece. A LOT.
But if I am to give you just a small critique in hope to perhaps make you do better, then I would say that there is something missing in this great work... something that would make her alive within this drawing instead of the still impression it gives.
Do I make sense?