Cover Blown

My entry to contest.

Jonah (black dragon) and Kento (blue dragon) are two best friends.

Story:
Jonah spots Kento sleeping under a tree, "perfect" he said. As quiet as a rabbit, he ran behind the big wooden tree. Using his great leg muscles he leaped onto the biggest limb. When he did, a few leaves fell near Kento. This alerted Kento and opened his left eye. He spotted Jonah in the tree. "Perfect," thought Kento.
"One, Two, Three!" Jonah leaps towards Kento, intending to pin him. Just then Kento twisted himself around and used his legs and kicked him like a kangaroo. "Oof!!"" Jonah flew in the air for a hudred feet and crashed hard into the ground. "You can never suprise me Jonah!" said Kento. Very slowly Jonah got up and smiled, "Oh I will one day Kento!" But first, let me catch my breath.

Critique?

Time: uh......11 hours?